jamiehmcw91

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you missed a good amount tho id wait till the next update to play again. i'll out in spoilers i'm sure im missing some as there is alot you missed and im going off the top of my head

Nyx making you think Erynn is dead
Iris looks like might be Erynn's half sister
John looks like might be Erynn's father
Zack betraying the MC
Erynn Photoshoot
Erynn getting a bit more bold in the MC's bedroom
Next day Erynn shower scene / Handjob
Erynn story progression in helping her solve her blackmail
Layla Club date
Layal losing her V card
Breaking Layla's heart if on Elena path
Beach hangout with Erynn , Iris and Lexi
Lexi and Iris club scene
Some Valeria scenes not alot of progression here but some
Brooke having a crush on our mother
Nikki / Cara come to vist
ep 12 shock value cliffhanger ( which won't be true)
I Wish we had every girl in the game like a harem.
 

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I Wish we had every girl in the game like a harem.
that's why I have like 20-30 saves planned even if it was a harem so to speak there is enough choices where id need to make separate saves anyways lol. So to me it makes sense for a character and design / branching point of view why it isnt one.
 

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Tori is the drama queen. Wtf are you smoking? She's also your sister once removed on your father's brother's sister's side. :ROFLMAO:
and we should care what she is to mc because?

not played this in ages? Anyone want too update me on what has happened?
lots and lots of things from nyx's side.

I haven't played since then either. But following this thread I learned that everyone is related and Nyx doesn't allow incest. :ROFLMAO:
said that every1 (well every girl (outside nikki and cara) is related to mc) is related few times on this thread since they have "some" similarities.
 

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My dude, please be joking. if not... nvm. You do you.



The game kinda lacks in the choices department. You are forced to do a lot of things with no option to avoid them. I stopped playing the game because of that.

When you go to the pool (very early on) you have to choose between who looks better in their swimsuit (or whatever) and there's no choice that helps you avoid picking anyone. Like a "Oh, that's a hard question to answer" or "I don't know" etc

I doubt you can even finish the game solo. You care about them too much? how about the other girls in all those other games you've played? you are cheating on them right now. Your love isn't true. It is only your lust.



How can you make things that aren't real, Happy? you cannot hurt something that isn't real and doesn't feel pain. You'll figure this out, soon.
Don't worry, it's all just for fun so we can enjoy ourselves together here.
 
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LSC82

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The game kinda lacks in the choices department. You are forced to do a lot of things with no option to avoid them. I stopped playing the game because of that.

When you go to the pool (very early on) you have to choose between who looks better in their swimsuit (or whatever) and there's no choice that helps you avoid picking anyone. Like a "Oh, that's a hard question to answer" or "I don't know" etc

I doubt you can even finish the game solo. You care about them too much? how about the other girls in all those other games you've played? you are cheating on them right now. Your love isn't true. It is only your lust.
No game is perfect and will offer every choice our collective brains can think of... it will always be limited by what the author thinks is important and wants us to focus on(and what she can render in a reasonable timeframe).

With that in mind this game has one of the most complex pathing and choices i've seen in AVNs and seems to follow a solid logic of keeping it's characters "alive".
If you spend time with someone>something happens directly.
If you don't spend time with this person, she's up to something off screen, the game does a good job making characters exist off screen and have their own lives.
Sometimes you end up learning things about a character in scene where a different character is the focus, which is interesting and makes multiple playthroughs worthwhile.

This game can be a romance if you focus on a girl, or the tale about the crazy life of a womanizing boy.

I'm not one to declare love for fictional characters(i may do it in a playful way).
But some characters manage to hit closer to home and get me invested in her story beyond "i'll fuck her because horny", i have more than one that got me invested here, some games fail to achieve this goal with any character(s) in which case they do become pure lust.
 

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No game is perfect and will offer every choice our collective brains can think of... it will always be limited by what the author thinks is important and wants us to focus on(and what she can render in a reasonable timeframe).

With that in mind this game has one of the most complex pathing and choices i've seen in AVNs and seems to follow a solid logic of keeping it's characters "alive".
If you spend time with someone>something happens directly.
If you don't spend time with this person, she's up to something off screen, the game does a good job making characters exist off screen and have their own lives.
Sometimes you end up learning things about a character in scene where a different character is the focus, which is interesting and makes multiple playthroughs worthwhile.

This game can be a romance if you focus on a girl, or the tale about the crazy life of a womanizing boy.

I'm not one to declare love for fictional characters(i may do it in a playful way).
But some characters manage to hit closer to home and get me invested in her story beyond "i'll fuck her because horny", i have more than one that got me invested here, some games fail to achieve this goal with any character(s) in which case they do become pure lust.
Only at my first run, so take this for what it is, a feedback based on limited time spent on it, but there's something that doesn't convince me.

I like the game (VN), but I get a feeling of "this will happen no matter what" specifically when speaking of girls getting interested in the protagonist, no matter how commited to s single LI the MC is... one can't feel like Zach doesn't have a point.

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I don't know if what I wrote makes much sense, it's just an aftertaste I'm getting by playing this VN.
 

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Only at my first run, so take this for what it is, a feedback based on limited time spent on it, but there's something that doesn't convince me.

I like the game (VN), but I get a feeling of "this will happen no matter what" specifically when speaking of girls getting interested in the protagonist, no matter how commited to s single LI the MC is... one can't feel like Zach doesn't have a point.

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I don't know if what I wrote makes much sense, it's just an aftertaste I'm getting by playing this VN.
Not played many VN's huh? :ROFLMAO:
 
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Not played many VN's huh? :ROFLMAO:
I have played some, more than I want to admit haha, this was suggested to me by different persons liking another one, and while I do like it (I also like that there's no real "insta-incest" mulitple path), some sell the "pussy-magnet" feeling better or don't have it at all.

This MC does not strike me as a "pussy-magnet" only thinking about humping like a rabbit, but everyone around him sort of does.

This si to say the MC is better written than others in similar VNs, is everything around him that feels... disjointed?
 

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Only at my first run, so take this for what it is, a feedback based on limited time spent on it, but there's something that doesn't convince me.

I like the game (VN), but I get a feeling of "this will happen no matter what" specifically when speaking of girls getting interested in the protagonist, no matter how commited to s single LI the MC is... one can't feel like Zach doesn't have a point.

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I don't know if what I wrote makes much sense, it's just an aftertaste I'm getting by playing this VN.
The MC being a pussy magnet is pretty much the standard in AVN's though, this is hardly surprising.
I actually like how the points system works in Intertwined and picking the right options, you will friend zone people off pretty quick. And your interactions will change quite alot, for instance Layla will offer to be your wingman in setting you up with Valeria. Compared to say Unbroken where I turn down Amrit like 100 times and still she tries again, which just made me feel bad for her.

Also, FUCK ZACH!!
 

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Only at my first run, so take this for what it is, a feedback based on limited time spent on it, but there's something that doesn't convince me.

I like the game (VN), but I get a feeling of "this will happen no matter what" specifically when speaking of girls getting interested in the protagonist, no matter how commited to s single LI the MC is... one can't feel like Zach doesn't have a point.

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I don't know if what I wrote makes much sense, it's just an aftertaste I'm getting by playing this VN.
You are not entirely wrong, with some girls simply acting nice towards them turns them hopelessly in love with the MC, the only way to be "safe" is to ignore and be unresponsive.
As Maviarab just pointed out this is very common to AVNs.
Maybe i'm making excuses... but the MC being a pussy magnet actually feels somewhat justified in Intertwined, Layla is an innocent girl with her first love(same thing works on Cara), Erynn has a big history with him, Iris is his ex... with a number of girls he has a head start or an easy path.
Compared to some others were the dude is a random freshman in college and suddenly everyone is throwing pussy at him, even seniors and teachers.

Wether you think he looks good or not is up to each individual... but he's designed to be something of a cool dude that already has tatoos and rides a bike while in HS... and can get work as a model if he wanted to.

Zach... is another cna of worms because the game made it impossible to be on good terms with him, and even if you clear the way for him he strikes out on his own, just hopeless.
 

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The MC being a pussy magnet is pretty much the standard in AVN's though, this is hardly surprising.
I actually like how the points system works in Intertwined and picking the right options, you will friend zone people off pretty quick. And your interactions will change quite alot, for instance Layla will offer to be your wingman in setting you up with Valeria. Compared to say Unbroken where I turn down Amrit like 100 times and still she tries again, which just made me feel bad for her.

Also, FUCK ZACH!!
What if I don't give a f about Valeria? I've been negative in every single possible encounter with her, yet...
The only ones I managed to "friendzone" for good (?) are the "sisters", I'm for now trying to follow a Lexi only path, so as soon as possible said no to:
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Then again I repeat, still limited exposure to this specific VN, so I most likely am missing a bunch of stuff.
 

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Only at my first run, so take this for what it is, a feedback based on limited time spent on it, but there's something that doesn't convince me.

I like the game (VN), but I get a feeling of "this will happen no matter what" specifically when speaking of girls getting interested in the protagonist, no matter how commited to s single LI the MC is... one can't feel like Zach doesn't have a point.

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I don't know if what I wrote makes much sense, it's just an aftertaste I'm getting by playing this VN.
1. Fuck Zach
2. Zach can go fuck himself
Here is the most important one. Are you ready for it? Don't look if you're not ready.
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What if I don't give a f about Valeria? I've been negative in every single possible encounter with her, yet...
The only ones I managed to "friendzone" for good (?) are the sisters, I'm for now trying to follow a Lexi only path, so as soon as possible said no to:
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Then again I repeat, still limited exposure to this specific VN, so I most likely am missing a bunch of stuff.
I was simply giving Valeria as an example of how Layla can pretty early on turn from a love interest to a good friend. I've always found it pretty easy to be faithful in Intertwined if I want the MC to be, which is why it's one of my favourites.

Also Nikki or Cara will only turn up IF you call Haley after speaking to your Mom, just a little tip for you. So you can still have fun without unwanted visitors.
 

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Maybe i'm making excuses... but the MC being a pussy magnet actually feels somewhat justified in Intertwined, Layla is an innocent girl with her first love(same thing works on Cara), Erynn has a big history with him, Iris is his ex... with a number of girls he has a head start or an easy path.
Compared to some others were the dude is a random freshman in college and suddenly everyone is throwing pussy at him, even seniors and teachers.

Wether you think he looks good or not is up to each individual... but he's designed to be something of a cool dude that already has tatoos and rides a bike while in HS... and can get work as a model if he wanted to.
:p;)

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I was simply giving Valeria as an example of how Layla can pretty early on turn from a love interest to a good friend. I've always found it pretty easy to be faithful in Intertwined if I want the MC to be, which is why it's one of my favourites.

Also Nikki or Cara will only turn up IF you call Haley after speaking to your Mom, just a little tip for you. So you can still have fun without unwanted visitors.
Nono I get it, and she's the perfect example, every other scene (in the path I'm on) the MC is getting more and more chances to jump on her, at least until the beach scene (didn't get any option in the last running scene), and I've tried my hardest to pick the worst option or ignore her completely when involved, the "normal" outcomes would be:
  1. She progress a sa character, gets it and stops popping up as a LI option (e.g. like in the case of Layla)
  2. The game gives you an opportunity to tell her "listen girl, don't know how to make it more clear, but I don't give a flying f about you, ok? No hard feelings we can remain friends... maybe"
The guy below you posted a meshup with BADIK, now I have no idea how long this VN will become once (if?) completed, but also in Badik you got relatively early the opportunity to tell Josy/Maya they are just friends, to f up beyond redempion anything happening with Bella (Cathy's panties in the car), and at the MC's birthday you have to hard pick either Sage or Jill, etc...
 
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Nono I get it, and she's the perfect example, every other scene (in the path I'm on) the MC is getting more and more chances to jump on her, at least until the beach scene (didn't get any option in the last running scene), and I've tried my hardest to pick the worst option or ignore her completely when involved, the "normal" outcomes would be:
  1. She progress a sa character, gets it and stops popping up as a LI option (e.g. like in the case of Layla)
  2. The game gives you an opportunity to tell her "listen girl, don't know how to make it more clear, but I don't give a flying f about you, ok? No hard feelings we can remain friends... maybe"
The guy below you posted a meshup with BADIK, now I have no idea how long this VN will become once (if?) completed, but also in Badik you got relatively early the opportunity to tell Josy/Maya they are just friends, to f up beyond redempion anything happening with Bella (Cathy's panties in the car), and at the MC's birthday you have to hard pick either Sage or Jill, etc...
This isn't that other game, this isn't any other game (which btw, should not be mentioned in a games thread, against forum rules) so comparing them is utterly futile. This is this story and it's written how it's written. That is that's story and is written how it is written.

What any other does is irelevent.

Also, maybe you should actually finish the story before making assumptions and commenting about things. After a certain section there is very little interaction with Valeria in terms of chasing her/possible interactions.
 

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This isn't that other game, this isn't any other game (which btw, should not be mentioned in a games thread, against forum rules) so comparing them is utterly futile. This is this story and it's written how it's written. That is that's story and is written how it is written.

What any other does is irelevent.

Also, maybe you should actually finish the story before making assumptions and commenting about things. After a certain section there is very little interaction with Valeria in terms of chasing her/possible interactions.
Just reached the end, and as mentioned above, yes the last scene involving her (last morning run) there's no more option to interact with her, but the one before (the beach) still was pretty much there and that means no idea how many scenes involving her as a character where I either ignored her, picked someone else, etc...

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And that's exactly my original point, I like this VN, pointed out something that in my opinion just "stood out", then again opinions are like a.holes everyone got one. :LOL:
 
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